Charlotte Doyle Discussion 4

Hey! I have done my blog post/comments on Hyo Jin's blog! Her blog's page is http://isklhjkim.blogspot.com/.

I have written comments on her page, but I'll post them here as well.

-PEGGY. K-

LIT CIRCLE 1

Dear Hyo Jin,your blog post is really good! Its pretty good because you had said a lot of detail, that was nice because it gave me a clear image of what had happened a couple weeks back. I don't think you should be so hard on yourself and say you felt stupid! We all did after we heard the other possibilities. Your blog post has added to my understanding of the novel because it brought back what we talked about at the very first discussion, so when Charlotte recalls something that happened back in the early chapters of the book, now I remember what she is talking about. I like the bit when you say Mr. Grummage CALLS himself that (that being Mr. Grummage). I remember when we were discussing our discussion, we talked about if Mr. Grummage was a member of the crew or not. I like how your blog post is so easy to read because every different part is a different paragraph. -Peggy. K-

LIT CIRCLE 2

Hi Hyo Jin!Your blog post is pretty interesting! Its interesting because this completely reminded me of what happened! I really do agree with you on everything, my insights didn't change much, just got bigger. Your blog post has influenced my understanding of the novel by all of the good details you have written. I don't really understand how it was creepy that me and Juanita had so many ideas. I like the part when you say that you really wanted to finish the book. Juanita and Abby did read pretty quickly. I agree with you that pages fourty-five to fourty-eight is when Charlotte finds out the truth. Well done!!!-Peggy-

LIT CIRCLE 3

Hello Hyo Jin!Your blog post is very well written. In my opinion it could use a little more detail (although it has a lot) at the begginning, you had written that she was spoiled and lady-like. Why? That is what I mean by more detail. I also suggest that you should explain what happened with the group. Some ideas that we had, perhaps some predictions we had shared as well. For your changes on Charlotte I agree on those, and for your changes on Captain Jaggery, well, I STRONGLY agree on those. They are very well written. Your blog post is enjoying to read! Overall you did a good job.-Peggy Kern-

As you can see, Hyo Jin's blog posts are very well written (judging from my comments) !!!

Great Job Hyo Jin!
-Peggy-